This picture is really well done. I noticed almost right away the spread of light from the candle all across the room, Also how the tears on Twilight's cheek and coat were actually reflecting a portion of light from the candle as well as her eyes doing the same. On the subject of the eyes One thing I saw right away is the amount of emotion and so to say feel that was present in them as she's looking to the side presumably at her mother. All in all it's a well done picture and it gets two thumbs up from me.
Twilight Sparkle, every book has it's end. I know that's kind of sad but, that's why we've got enjoy the story we have,at least that's what I figure. (she looks at me with super sad eyes) -sigh- here you go, read this. (The Arabian Nights)
i loved the way you ended it i dont realy care that you dident finish it but its just that every time a story i like ends and i can see a way for it to contine i start feeling depressed becaus the way i suddenly crash back into reality then i start reading/whatching a new story and so on EG: farscape the way that ended made me feel down for it being the start of a new story that i will never get to see: you finished your part of the story now i just need to watch for someone else to pick it up PS: i think while writing this my mind whas thinking of more than one thing
Know what dude? I'll work really hard and make that litle 's project (that turned out awesome) Into a BIG-HUGE-LVL-FALLOUT-EQUESTRIA Story. I may take a year, but i'll do it. Send me a note if interested in helping, or if know somepony who can